Constraint
and Emancipation
or
Why I Think Song Lyric Ought To Be Considered a Legitimate Poetic Form
I love songs, and I love song lyrics. To me, a great song lyric is an
artistic achievement that stands alongside the novel, the short story,
the play, and the poem as one of the finest of written creations. It
has its own logic, its own rhythm, and its own reason to be. And most
importantly perhaps, it is like no other form, in that its formal constraints
are unique unto itself.
Why then,
has song lyric been so rarely considered a legitimate form of poetry?
Before
I attempt to address this, let me say that of course song lyric has
had its heroes, its heydays, and its moments of literary inclusion.
Think of sixties-era icons like Bob Dylan or Joni Mitchell, ageless
innovators like Tom Waits or Leonard Cohen, post-punk aggressors like
Nick Cave and Patti Smith, alterna-svengalis like Henry Rollins, even
recent pop culture divas like Jewel. These are songwriters who have
been recognized for their lyrics, and have all at one time or another
had their lyrics published in book form as poetry. And what of legendary
workhorses like Jerry Lieber and Mike Stoller, Carole King, Hoagy Carmichael,
or Bernie Taupin? These individuals may not be as well-known as the
artists who recorded their works, but to those in the know, these are
lyricists as poetic as any writer out there. But go to any internet
search engine (that barometer of modern cultural mores), and you will
see poetry coming in under the heading of "arts" while music languishes
under "entertainment." Given this reality, one can't help but feel that
a value judgment has been made.
I ask
you to consider how often we hear lyrics referred to as "poetic", or
as having a "poetry" to them, and how often we ourselves refer to them
as such. Certainly it's common enough to suggest the existence of proper
poets in the ranks of the songwriters, and proper poems in the archives
of song. And yet we rarely, if ever, see these works treated as poetry.
Why?
Maybe
it's because we're just so used to the omnipresence of fundamentally
underwritten songs that rely on music to compensate for their poetic
lackings that we've come to view them as separate forms altogether,
forever banishing song lyric from the realm of poetry. Certainly many
a great vocalist has emoted their way through lyrics that read on paper
like the most pedestrian of Hallmark cards. And it's certainly true
that composers have used what could be considered musical crutches like
the swell of a string section, the crash of a cymbal, the roar of an
electric guitar, to create a drama that isn't present in the lyric itself.
But is it fair then to shrug off all song lyric accordingly, because
of a proliferation of bad lyrics that rely on music and voice to sell
their story? Hardly. It's no more fair than if we were to write off
poetry in general because we've found too many bad examples of it.
It could
be that the problem is how song lyric tends to read on the page. It's
true that most song lyrics, particularly in the realm of modern popular
music in all its many incarnations, can be insipidly simplistic. Repetitive
imagery, obvious rhyme schemes, bludgeoningly sing-songish rhythms,
all these curses have plagued the land of the lyric. But cannot the
same be said of "poetry" as well? Is bad writing unique to song lyric?
Again, hardly. In fact, poetry and song lyric share a great many negative
commonalities, none more common, for example, than the redundancy of
trite subject matter.
Can it
be some sort of claim of linguistic purity, by virtue of its status
as a purely written form, that keeps the halls of poetry closed to the
outside world of mongrel forms such as song lyric? But what then of
Dylan Thomas' famous readings? Surely we must admit his works came alive
in previously unforeseen and magical ways when he delivered them aurally.
Or think of the Beats and their "bop prosody", a series of literary
experiments and expansions that forever changed the creative landscape
of modern poetry. And think of poets such as John Digiorno or Amiri
Baraka, whose works are often designed only to be heard aloud and never
read. In fact, modern poetry's most successful commercial and reputational
surge has been the rise of "spoken-word" as a genre unto itself. Take
former musician turned spoken-word artist Exene Cervenka, who is now
a successfully published and respected author of poetry, and compare
her to the celebrated modern-folk icon Ani Difranco. Are they so different
as writers that only one can be considered a proper poet?
Perhaps
the poetic bias against song lyric stems from the notion that a song
is simply too structured an entity, that there is just not enough room
within its narrow system to allow for truly poetic expression. This
has certainly been argued before, and many a well-intentioned and talented
songwriter has battled accusations of compromise (both from within and
without), that somehow they've sacrificed content for the sake of form.
But consider the haiku: surely this is as strict a form, if not stricter,
than, say, the three-minute pop song? Yet haiku as a genre has given
birth to some of the most beautiful, and beautifully complex, pieces
of writing in history. And the rebellions to, and re-thinkings of, haiku
as well have left us with wondrous literary gifts. Han-Shan's visionary
"Cold Mountain Poems" could surely not have come to be without their
author deliberately throwing off the cultural, situational, and linguistic
strictures of haiku. I think the point here is that it's through the
author's relationship to the form at hand, be it adversarial, reverential,
naively semi-aware or academically obsessive, that great new works are
born.
This is
really the heart of the matter for me, this issue of formal constraint.
Each type of creation, be it a novel, a play, a poem, or whatever, has
its own sets of rules. Following and/or reacting to them is how we create
new examples of the form. And as difficult and limiting as certain of
these rules can be, it's through building a creative relationship with
these structures that we find our moments of artistic enlightenment.
Just as it was e.e. cummings' frustration with the limitation of having
to put words on a page that led him to his revolutionary style of literary
presentation, or Jack Kerouac's frustration with punctuation and the
rules of grammar that led him to develop his "Spontaneous Prose," so
too was it Rainer Maria Rilke's respect for tradition and love of language
that drove him to create his beloved Elegies. And the same goes for
the songwriters. For every aural experiment to come from the minds of
revolutionaries as diverse as The Beatles on "The White Album" to Chuck
D on Public Enemy's "Fear of a Black Planet," there is a Tracy Chapman
or a Bono who can temporarily re-ignite the lyrical souls of their cultural
compatriots with a fast car or a street with no name, in and around
three-and-a-half minutes.
Song lyric
is a form like any other, complete with its own set of rules and constraints,
no different at this level then a Shakespearean soliloquy or a haiku.
Its verses, choruses, bridges and codas, its rhyme schemes and its rhythms,
these are merely rules of poetic form, guidelines within which (and
around) the writer is forced to work if he or she wishes to create a
new contribution to the canon. And as cultures have evolved, devolved,
progressed and regressed, these so-termed rules of form have come and
gone, blended and morphed, paled in the face of new times, and laughed
down old ones, all the while mirroring the liquid nature of the worlds
they strive to explain. And the artists have responded in kind, adding,
almost inadvertently, through their inevitable relationships to form,
an extra layer of sensory content and power to their works, that being
the ability to represent, to capture, if you will, a certain sense of
time and place.
I am a
songwriter. It's how I survive financially, and it's how I survive emotionally.
I love to write songs like very little else that I have ever done. But
more simply said, I just love to write. I have written rhymed poetry
and free verse, short stories and novellas, even a novel. And periodically,
I have been fortunate enough to be published in these fields. Yet without
fail, I have returned to the song, time and time again. And not because
of any career obligations or desires. Not because I owe another album
to my record label, or another batch of songs to my publisher. And not
because I like to stand on a stage and strum my guitar to the hoped-for
delight of a listening public. No, I keep returning to the song because
its peculiar set of constraints has freed my heart, mind, and soul in
a way no other form has done. I have never felt that my song lyrics
have been compromised for the sake of "working" within a song format.
Rather, my best lyrics are my best because they say exactly what I want
to say.
So, even
if I have made any headway in elucidating my conviction that good song
lyrics ought to be considered a legitimate form of poetry, the question
still remains as to whether they ought to be experienced in any context
other than that of the song. That is to say, should we read them? I
can only answer yes, because when they're truly good, they provide a
multi-dimensional richness that grants you new insight each new way
and time you experience them. Just as I have re-discovered "Kaddish"
anew each time I have seen footage of Allen Ginsburg reading it, so
too has the on-paper re-reading of Bob Dylan's "Desolation Row" re-enlightened
me, and re-altered the subsequent experience of listening to the song
as recorded.
To truly
know a great work, one must learn all it has to offer, and to truly
be a great work, it must offer much.
In our
home is a wonderful two-volume edition of Funk and Wagnalls' new practical
standard dictionary of the english language. It is bound in wondrously
aged burgundy leather veined with black, its pages are brown and yellow
at their edges, it smells like a grandmother's attic, and it is dated
1956. In it, a poem is defined as follows:
"a concrete
expression of feeling and imagination in verse, beautiful, harmonious,
and illuminating."
I hope
i can rest my case.
Copyright © 2003 Christopher Watkins